Book Review: The Great Snowball Escapade

The Great Snowball Escapade

by J. D. Holiday;  illus. by the author

Primary     Book Garden Publishing     90 pp.

3/10     978-0981861425 $5.99

Wilhelmina, or Wil as she likes to be called, is upset.  Her cousin Bud is now living with her family and she knows that he stole her new pink pencil sharpener.  Bud denies it, but makes little effort in winning her friendship or the friendship of others.  Wil has to find a way to get along with Bud.   But a snowball fight ensues, a friend’s cat is lost, and a bully appears with a scary dog.  What more could go wrong for Wil?  J. D. Holiday delivers just the right amount of suspense to entice children to turn the pages.  Perfect for six to eight year old readers and loaded with black and white illustrations, the story shows the effect of bullying and the value of understanding another’s point of view.

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Writers' News

Photo by Lucas

I found a website with many helpful writing resources:  http://www.resourcesforchildrenswriters.com/ 

On Rachelle Burk’s website you can spend hours checking out writers’ articles, agent and editor listings, critique groups and much more. 

For personal news, I submitted to Albert Whitman in June.  After waiting 4 months, I conclude they are passing on my manuscript.  I received a personal rejection letter from Curtis Brown Literary Agency.

Here’s a list of the publishing houses that I submitted to this fall:

Tanglewood Press, Alfred A. Knopf Books for Young Readers, Dutton Books, Boyds Mills Publishing, Peachtree Publishing, Philomel Books, Holiday House, and Charlesbridge.

I’ve had more luck with placing my nonfiction articles.   After several attempts, I was awarded an acceptance with Highlights for Children. And Appleseeds, the respected social studies magazine for children, accepted my article on the Derby race horse, Visionaire. 

Remember as you write your picture book to practice writing in different genres.  Consider writing fictional short stories, poetry, or nonfiction articles for children’s magazines.  Now take it one step further and submit your work. (Of the three, nonfiction is the easiest to get published.)  Two markets that will most likely welcome your work are http://www.viatouch.com/  and www.storiesforchildrenmagazine.org .  I’m an editor at both publications and look forward to reading well-researched, interesting topics for children.  Publishing nonfiction will help you earn credentials, which will impress a picture book editor.     

Coming next week:  a review of J. D. Holiday’s chapter book, The Great Snowball Escapade. Sign up as a follower to enter the book-giveaway contest.

Preview of The Great Snowball Escapade by J.D. Holiday

Stories for Children Magazine is hosting a book tour in December. After I receive and read The Great Snowball Escapade, I will write a review and offer a book giveaway.  All followers of my blog will be eligible.  Contest details will be posted soon.   

From the Publisher: The Great Snowball Escapade by J.D. Holiday is a 90 page chapter book for six to eight year olds. Its young readers will have many enjoyable hours reading about Wil, her cousin Bud and her friends.

Wilhemena Brooks' cousin, Bud Dunphry comes to live with her family. Wil, as she likes to be called, finds her pink pencil sharpener is missing after Christmas. Wil knows Bud has it! Who else would have taken it? Bud doesn't like girls! In fact, Bud doesn't like anybody. Wil tries to ignore him but he pulls her friend’s hair and takes over games.  When Bud is in trouble he makes his "you're going to get it" face at her. After a snowstorm closes school, Wil and her friends go sled riding. Bud shows up and starts a snowball fight, which lands Wil in her room for the rest of the day for fighting. When her pencil sharpener is found, right where she left it, Wil decides she has to try harder to understand her cousin and stay out of trouble. Her mother told her to be nice to Bud and to treat him like she would like to be treated. If Wil treats Bud nicely does that change anything for her?

I look forward to sharing J. D. Holiday’s book with you.

Writing Picture Books by Ann Whitford Paul

I ordered Ann Whitford Paul's Writing Picture Books as recommended by Harold Underdown, editor and creator of “Writing, Illustrating, and Publishing Children’s Books: The Purple Crayon” http://www.underdown.org/writing-picture-books-review.htm 

 

Amazon.com says of Paul’s book: 

Writing picture books is not easy. Picture books are a unique form of writing with a large audience of 2- to 8-year-olds, and they must appeal to both the adult purchaser and the child listener/reader. They are generally 32 pages long and must be tightly focused and told partly through illustrations. And novice picture book writers make a lot of mistakes--and get a lot of rejections from publishers flooded with inappropriate manuscripts. From this book these writers will learn the writing and revision process that will lead them to creating more salable picture book manuscripts. Ann Whitford Paul covers researching the picture books market, creating characters, point of view, plotting, tips on writing rhyme, and the lessons writers need in order to write great picture books that will appeal to both editors/agents and young readers/parents. She uses a mix of instruction and hand-on exercises, often asking readers to cut, color and paste their way through revision.

Many of my picture book stories have won writers’ awards, but I’ve yet to have one published.  With this book, I’m hoping to learn more and to get closer to the goal of publication.

The Waiting Game

When you submit a picture book to a publisher you may wait up to 4 – 6 months for a response.

Here’s what you can do in the meantime:

Create a list of publishers and agents you’d like to send your work to

Read publishers’ and agents’ blogs

Research topics that interest you

Take those topics and write a fictional story or a nonfiction article

Write articles for writers’ newsletters and magazines

Read books in all genres, first for enjoyment and then as a writer

Meet with another writer for coffee or lunch

Form or join a critique group

Talk with librarians about their current needs

Enter a writing contest

Offer to help another writer edit his work

Create a website

Re-write an article using a different slant and pitch it to another market

Consider co-hosting a writers’ event or workshop

Sign up for a writing class

Brainstorm new ideas for another picture book  

What other writers’ ideas do you have when you play the waiting game?

15 "Must-Haves" before Submitting

I write and submit nonfiction articles as well as picture books.  Writing can be challenging—publication even harder. But I’ve discovered that the process is easier when I have the following:           

A comfortable chair

A room with plenty of light 

Silence  

Coffee, chocolate, or any comfort food

The will to let the answering machine pickup

Passion about my writing

The drive to read my work out loud 

A first reader to point out mistakes or to make suggestions

The resolve to edit my work to perfection

An understanding of the market 

A grasp of the submission guidelines

An irresistible query letter, one page

Patience as I wait for an editor’s response

Tough skin if I receive a rejection

Perseverance to submit again

What "must-haves" do you need when you write?

Make an Editor's Day

If you’re thinking about writing and submitting a picture book, it pays to accrue writing credentials.  The fastest way to do so is to write nonfiction.  Really.  It’s easier to get published writing nonfiction than fiction.  Find a topic that interests you.  Make sure it has kid appeal.  Research it.  Write the piece in a kid-friendly in tone.  Then research the magazine markets to find a publisher. Pitch your idea to an editor.      

I’m an editor for the educational website http://www.viatouch.com/ and assistant nonfiction editor for Stories for Children Magazine.  So take it from me, you can improve your chance of an acceptance when you:

Follow the writers’ guidelines, even if you’ve submitted to the publication before

Present an ordinary topic in an extraordinary way

Use reliable sources (that does not include Wikipedia)

Write an article with a great hook, a beginning, middle, and satisfying ending

Incorporate similes, metaphors, alliteration into your articles

Use spell and grammar check  

Check your facts, dates, and spelling of proper nouns

Use a grade assessment tool as a guide to writing for the appropriate target age

Ask a reader to take a look at your piece before submitting

Have an expert read your work for accuracy

Keep your query to one page

Provide photographs or images 

Thank an editor for her time

Make the revisions an editor has requested 

There you have it—14 tips to garner an acceptance.  I guarantee it.